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FOUR LITTLE WORDS

Rating: T
Genre: Love/Friendship
Characters: Dean and Baby
Spoilers/Warnings: Big spoilers for 10.02, Reichenbach and small ones for 10.05 Fan Fiction.
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine

The Impala is very forgiving.
Impala POV.

xxxxx

The way he handles that wrench, it's enough to make a girl weep with joy.

A frisson of pleasure runs through me, throbbing through my every newly-tightened rivet as he runs his hand carefully over my gleaming paintwork.

His hot breath mists over my fender as he lifts the hem of his T shirt and buffs away a smear of wax. That's when I hear his voice, as soft and low as distant thunder; "looking good there, Baby."

Four little words meant just for me.

The terrible memory of those four other words; "it's just a car," are long gone.

xxxxx

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Date: 2014-11-18 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milly-gal.livejournal.com
Oh Honey! This is perfect! I described this scene to Steve as Dean making up for the way he treated Baby whilst he was a demon and this has captured that image PERFECTLY!

Date: 2014-11-21 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Yes, I totally agree, I think Dean was doing some serious 'making up' to Baby heree, but she's a smart girl - she understands that Dean wasn't himself.

Date: 2014-11-21 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milly-gal.livejournal.com
She knows, but he needed to show her *holds him so tight*

Date: 2014-11-18 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassiopeia7.livejournal.com
Yesssss. ♥ So delightfully porny, too -- "his hot breath," "frisson of pleasure," even Dean lifting up his shirt -- just wonderful. Dean is back in Baby's good graces, and all is well with the world. Beautiful job creating the intimacy that is Dean's relationship with his Baby.

. . . seriously, I wanted to SMACK Dean when he said "It's just a car," demon or not. But if Baby can forgive, so can I. :)

Date: 2014-11-21 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed Dean's porny car maintenance session :)
I think you're not alone - the whole fandom drew in a gasp when Dean said that!!

Date: 2014-11-19 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metallidean-grl.livejournal.com
After d!Dean's comments about Baby being "just" a car, it was absolutely wonderful to see him tinkering around in the engine last week, cleaning her up and getting her back to her glistening shape. I am sure she was also very happy to get the attention an old gal like her needs and deserves. This was just right.

Date: 2014-11-21 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Yes Dean was doing some serious 'making up' to his baby, but she's a smart lady - she knows he wasn't himself when he said those awful words!

Date: 2014-11-19 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leighannwallace.livejournal.com
Love this, Diz.

Date: 2014-11-21 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Thank you :)
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