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Right, I am going for it.  I am going to try a 'cut'.
This may not sound like a big adventure, but when you are a complete computer dunce like me, trust me, this could go anywhere!

I'm working on some wonderful idiot-proof instructions, so here goes ... with a little piece of fic called simply, 'shoulder' ... but whose shoulder?

Rating K+
Genre H/C Humour
Words 100 approx
Disclaimer: I own nothing, it's tragic really …

Dean + injury + pain = Sammy being an awesome little brother

 

*flinch*

"Dean …"

*cringe*

"DEAN!"

*twitch*

"Dean, I haven't touched you yet."

"Well, friggin' get on with it!"

"I will, if you'd just keep still."

*flinch*

"Oh, for Heaven's sake!"

*twitch*

"Dude, I've got a dislocated shoulder here …"

"Yes, I know - you won't let me near it."

*deep breaths* "Right, get on with it …"

"Sure?"

"Yeah, sure."

"Ready?"

*jaw clench…* "Ready!"

*flinch*

"Damnit - will you keep still!"

"tryin' Sammy …"

"well, try harder."

"Sammy, it hurts …"

"DEAN, LOOK …"

"Where?"

*CRUNCH*

"NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGHHH!" *pants*

"T-thanks du …"

*THUD*

"Don't mention it, bro'!"

Xxxxx

end

 


Date: 2010-12-20 07:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tahirire.livejournal.com
Yaaaaay!! Your cut worked! :D

Date: 2010-12-20 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Thanks to your advice!!!

Date: 2010-12-20 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Great dialog snippet--paints the picture completely!

Date: 2010-12-20 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Ah, thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2010-12-20 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winsangel.livejournal.com
loved it!

Date: 2010-12-23 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2011-03-31 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] si-star-x.livejournal.com
Yeeouch! Just like a bandaid, Sammy. This is totally how it would play out. Dean's such a baby. <3

Date: 2018-09-15 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com
So sweet Sammy did that for Dean, pain was excruciating, but still!

Always there for one another, even if it was Sam with the dislocated shoulder.

Great fic!

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