Time Out

Apr. 4th, 2014 12:44 pm
dizzojay: (Dean)
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Here's a teeny-weeny little story that I wrote for a fellow fanfic author, the lovely Vanessa Sgroi, on the occasion of her birthday ...

TIME OUT

Rating: T
Genre: Largely plotless Dean appreciation (is that a genre?)
Character: Dean Winchester
Spoilers/Warnings: Non-graphic nudity!
Word count: 475
Disclaimer: don't own him!

Dean having some special time out after an exhausting hunt; this may or may not have been inspired by certain pictures that are doing the rounds on the internet right now ...

It was seventy years old and every scrap of logic that had ever found its way into Dean's skull knew it shouldn't work. Yet somehow it did.

Sam had applied his formidable mind to the puzzle almost as soon as the brothers had discovered the Men of Letters' bunker and still had no reasonable explanation to show for his labours.

So Dean just filed it under his 'ain't broke don't fix' list and calmly carried on regardless, relishing the benefits it brought.

Tonight, he appreciated it more than ever as he stood under the powerful spray; its temperature just south of too hot, its tortuously good pressure kneading and pummelling aching, tired shoulders like relentless fingertips.

A deep sigh rumbled in his chest as he stood, head bowed onto his bicep, palm pressed against the smooth tiled wall. He revelled in the steaming torrent which pounded his weary body, penetrating sore, abused muscles like a healing balm and soothing away the tension of tonight's hunt.

He breathed deeply, inhaling the pine-scented steam that coiled around him, and relaxed; trying not to relive the trauma of the werewolf attack. The sting of a thousand needles of hot water rinsing the gash across his back, washing away the creature's grime and filth together with his own spilled blood, was a good pain, a cleansing pain and Dean welcomed it. He began to drift, losing himself in the water's comforting heat and mesmerised by the fading red spiral that circled the drain between his bare feet.

Pulling in another deep breath, he closed his eyes and tipped his head back, allowing hot rivulets to trickle down the curve of his throat, pooling in the hollows above his collarbones before cascading down the slippery planes of his chest, rinsing away the rich soapy lather which pooled at his feet, before coiling lazily down the drain, taking with it the last of the lingering fatigue that weighed so heavily on him.

He raised his head, blinking through pearls of steam which clung to his lashes and stretched, flexing his rigid back. Combing fingers through his soaking hair, he scraped it back from his wet forehead and sighed as he slowly turned the handle to switch off the water.

There were many wonders in the bunker; magical, dangerous and extraordinary things that spanned centuries and astounded all who saw them.

Right now, Dean would trade them all for a few more blissful moments under that shower.

xxxxx

end

Date: 2014-04-04 12:19 pm (UTC)
fanspired: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fanspired
Nice.Sensual. Rich imagery.

Date: 2014-04-04 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
'Sensual is a lovely word! Glad you liked it!

Date: 2014-04-04 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexisjane.livejournal.com
I'm so jealous of that water pressure! : ) Really lovely.
Thank you x

Date: 2014-04-04 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
'marvellous' I believe Dean called it when he was schlepping around the bunker in the dead guy robe!

Date: 2014-04-04 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milly-gal.livejournal.com
Beautiful imagery hun, soft and sensual, like caramel sliding down the side of a stack of pancakes! :)

Date: 2014-04-04 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Or what about caramel sliding down the side of Dean Winchester?
Damnit, now I'm hungry!

Date: 2014-04-05 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milly-gal.livejournal.com
Hot damn, now I'm something else that starts with 'H' How long til that shower scene!

Date: 2014-04-04 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kinkthatwinked.livejournal.com
Damn, I want a hot shower myself just from reading this ... or at least to watch Dean taking one. Yeah, that would work, too.

Date: 2014-04-04 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
I go for the second option!

Date: 2014-04-04 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jj1564.livejournal.com
Mmm that was lovely, I just can't get enough of showering Dean! I'd like to be a drop of water running down his face, his neck, his chest, over his stomach and down....!

Date: 2014-04-07 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Okay, you don't even want to know where my mind has gone to as a resullt of your comment!!!
*fans self*

Date: 2014-04-05 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sasha-dragon.livejournal.com
What gorgeous imagery! Damn how long is it before we get the shower scene? But in the meantime, I will just go and read this a few more times.

Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2014-04-07 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Shower scene 15th April, 9 days from today - but who's counting?
I only hope we get a long, detailed scene and good camerawork.

Purely for artistic purposes of course!

x

Date: 2014-04-06 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metallidean-grl.livejournal.com
Sometimes there is nothing better than a good hot shower with good water pressure. I often feel like Dean when I am tired and just don't want to start the day.

I do love your imagery. Can't help but imagine being under that nice hot shower spray WITH Dean. ;)

Date: 2014-04-07 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzojay.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed this one - under that shower spray with Dean was exactly where I was when I was writing this - in my dreams!

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