Yet another one of those stories that make me wish the SPN writers read the fanfics. This is a story that could be a multi-episode arc.
Great job. Is it wrong that I loved Dean suffering a torture that finally broke him? Not in that "turn on his family" way, but just in the "completely strip him of his cockiness" way? I definitely LOVED seeing Sam get that panicked, then enraged, and then nurturing, all for his brother. I especially liked that just as it looked like it was turning into a purely H/C story, you brought the case back into it. I also loved that you turned Dean's torture into the one way the spirits could be defeated ... and that "defeat" actually meant thousands of innocent souls finding peace. Lastly, I really liked how you took your own country's history and wove it into an SPN story, one that took the boys (well, Bobby) out of America for a while.
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Date: 2015-03-16 05:27 am (UTC)Great job. Is it wrong that I loved Dean suffering a torture that finally broke him? Not in that "turn on his family" way, but just in the "completely strip him of his cockiness" way? I definitely LOVED seeing Sam get that panicked, then enraged, and then nurturing, all for his brother. I especially liked that just as it looked like it was turning into a purely H/C story, you brought the case back into it. I also loved that you turned Dean's torture into the one way the spirits could be defeated ... and that "defeat" actually meant thousands of innocent souls finding peace. Lastly, I really liked how you took your own country's history and wove it into an SPN story, one that took the boys (well, Bobby) out of America for a while.
Brava!